Who Needs Feminism When You Have Femininity?

I chose “Who Needs Feminism When You Have Femininity?” which was a great attention catching title to begin with and sounds very appealing to read. It was kind of hard to read due to grammatical mistakes which makes it seem a bit sloppy and rushed. This is a bit terrible because if they had put more effort into writing, their information would carry a heavier weight. I feel like this writer could have gone deeper into what the community is about, it all seems like surface information. I’d like to see what people are posting, commenting on, offering their opinions on in a direct informative way, basically what they’re talking about. I give this paper a 76.75 overall score. 

Comments ( 2 )

  1. Marieme Jiddou
    I agree with you the title was very catchy and interesting.
  2. bethanie corona
    I also wrote about this essay and I would disagree, despite the author's grammatical errors I felt like the author did provide insight and planned the structure of her essay.

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