I chose “Who Needs Feminism When You Have Femininity?” which was a great attention catching title to begin with and sounds very appealing to read. It was kind of hard to read due to grammatical mistakes which makes it seem a bit sloppy and rushed. This is a bit terrible because if they had put more effort into writing, their information would carry a heavier weight. I feel like this writer could have gone deeper into what the community is about, it all seems like surface information. I’d like to see what people are posting, commenting on, offering their opinions on in a direct informative way, basically what they’re talking about. I give this paper a 76.75 overall score. 

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