Reading Response #4

Asadullah Bin Amir 

Prof. Shamecca Harris 



Reading Response #4 


Essay: How Individual Upbringing Affects Young Adult Romantic Relationships

Grade: A- 


Response: After carefully evaluating the essay, I personally believe the essay lacks a perfect structure. Although the author uses multiple credible sources in order to back her claim, the arrangement of these sources lacked structure. Moving past that the essay was an amazing insight about something we all struggle with in this hookup culture. The author highlights that by showing the family contributions. Furthermore every article is backed with an interpretation which solidifies the author’s point. Conclusion is well written, revisits the original thesis while adding more information from the articles. Great piece, the only criticism I have is the structure of the articles used within the essay. 


Comments ( 2 )

  1. Marieme Jiddou
    What do you mean by her sources lacking structure?
  2. Ashley Borja
    I agree the conclusion was well written and added thought-provoking questions. I do believe there was more to be said about this question-- I felt like there was information missing from the essay.

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