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Reading response 4

I did my review on the essay “Act Like A Man, Act like a women”  which I gave the grade of 80. The research question is not that unique since there are many debates and controversial stuff on that topic in today’s society.   The organization of this essay is good. It has a strong introduction and conclusion. Also, I liked how the information was divided into sections.  The paper has five sources but they are not well explained. For example, the author used many pieces of evidence from the sources but they were not analyzed as much. They can elaborate on it more. Overall, the essay is good and answers the research question.

Comments ( 3 )

  1. Asadullah Bin Amir
    You provided a good reasoning for the grade given,
  2. Sharon Leal
    I like how you pointed out the sources need to be analyzed more deeper. This gives me a suggestion for my own sources and to explain the sources deeper without doing too much.
  3. Marieme Jiddou
    I agree with you the introduction and conclusion were strong. I also liked how they divided up their essay. But I disagree, the research question has been talked about a lot but usually its just people using their subjective feelings to argue. The author used factual evidence of hormones to argue her point which is something "new"

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